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The pledge:

Pledge by National Infant Feeding network

1) Will provide evidence and advocate for targeting towards vulnerable/young/low-socio-economic group women who would benefit the most.
2) Act a key stakeholder, surrogate, advising campaign strategy.
3) Monitor adverts and corporate partnerships to hold City Hall and London's boroughs to account.

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