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The pledge:

Pledge by ADPH London

1) Will commission the development of a framework of best practice for 0-19 services in 2018. The framework will be available to all London local authorities to review current practice and identify areas for improvement.
2) And The Children’s Public Health Network along with representation from 30 boroughs, provides an established system to coordinate work at a London level and thereby support the implementation of the Mayor’s ambitions.

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